2015高考英语作文点评及详细解析（新课标I卷）

今年全国新课标I卷高考英语作文的题目为：

假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。

一、要点如下：

1、栏目介绍；

2、稿件内容

3、稿件长度：约400字

4、交稿日期：6月28日前

对于书信作文强调两点，简单&通用。需要注意书信作文三段论，把中间段的要点部分用出彩的过渡词做链接，就能写出漂亮的文章。

二、写作提纲

根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：

第一段：问候+写信背景（我校办杂志）+写信目的（套用十大书信之“求助信“写法）

第二段：主题句+拓展句1（介绍外国生活）+拓展句2（介绍外国节日）+拓展句3（不少于400字）+拓展句4（6.28前交）

第三段：我希望（你能帮助我）。我相信（大家会喜欢你的文章）。感谢你（读我的信）。请回信！

三、名师范文

Dear Peter,

How are you doing? （问候）Recently, our school newspaper will started a column about western life and culture in order to cultivate our interests, broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschool life.（写信背景+白银裤衩+八大万能利） As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it. （写信目的）

Here are some details about it. （经典主题句）To begin with, you may talk about your life in your middle school, so that we Chinese students can know more about you. （简单句+白银裤衩）Besides, you can introduce a western festival, such as the Christmas Day, the New Year or the Thanksgiving Day, which must be not only meaningful but also interesting. （简单句+平行并列结构+白银裤衩+八大万能利）What’s more, your article should be at least 400 words.（简单句，不用升级，以便“长短结合”） Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to be before June 28th, so that it can be published in time. （求助信套话+白银裤衩）

Hopefully, you could do me the favor.（六大结尾句之一） I have the confidence that everyone will like your article. （六大结尾句之二）Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer.（书信必备结尾句） I’m looking forward to your reply and your article.（书信必备结尾句）

Best wishes,

Yours,

LiHua

来源：新东方在线