2013年6月英語六級考試作文真題及范文（1）

2013年06月21日15:52  

2013年上半年的四六級考試已結束，新東方在線網絡課堂四六級輔導團隊第一時間力邀四級、六級輔導名師對此次真題進行解析。以下是對六級寫作的思路指導及范文，希望即將參加六級考試的同學能以此為借鑒，運用到自己的寫作當中，舉一反三。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “A smile is the shortest distance between two people”. You may cite some examples to support you view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

難度：

典型的諺語警句型的文章，相比其他三篇難度低很多，諺語本身非常好理解，並且是最好用諺語警句模板套用的一篇。

思路：

第一段：開篇引用＋表義（微笑縮短了人與人的距離）＋深意（生活中，我們應該微笑面對他人）

第二段：正能量（微笑的魔力，比如可以讓我們交到更多朋友，可以化解尷尬，對於商家來說微笑可以帶來更多商機等，還可反面論証一下，沒有了微笑， 生活就會失去溫暖和色彩，等等）＋舉例（必須要舉例！題目要求了。可以寫某企業微笑服務取得成功，或者你自己參加面試因為微笑所以獲得面試官認可等）

第三段：再次強調微笑的重要性＋我們自己具體應該怎麼做

范文：

A smile, as the proverb has it, is the shortest distance between two people. In other words, a smile could serve as a bridge to connect two people and shorten the distance between two hearts. Simple as the remark may sound, it conveys a thought-provoking notion that we should always be friendly and polite to other people.

First and foremost，a smile proves to be the most effective way to break the ice between two strangers. In addition, being warm-hearted and friendly could promote mutual understanding and friendship. Those who always wear a warm smile are sure to be more popular than those who treat others with coldness and indifference. Zhu Dan is a case in point. She is said to practice smiling in front of the mirror for hours everyday before walking up onto the stage. Finally, she becomes one of the most famous hostesses in China.

To conclude, nothing can be more effective than a warm smile in bringing people closer. Hence, it is advisable for people to open their mind and treat others with sincerity and warmth. Only in this way can we win more friends.

（來源：新東方在線）

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